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CM : Charity kisses by kachima CM : Charity kisses by kachima
:heart: :heart: SPECIAL PIN UP COMMISSION :heart: :heart:

COMMISSION by :iconumasalazar:

Character : Arcadia

Pose reference : [link]

PROGRAM : Photoshop/SAI


HOPE YOU ENJOY IT :heart:

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Open Commission for last slot here : [link]
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:iconisho13:
This looks great! I love the way you color *-*

Now, a few things I want to point out:

Overall good understanding of anatomy, but her left leg (the one under her other leg) looks like it's sticking out from the middle of her body. I don't know if explaining myself well. >.< So I'll leave this here: [link] Look at the third one, starting from left. Since it's a similar pose, it'll be good reference.

Then the braids, they fall naturally. For the braids to be in the air like that, she'd have to be making a quick movement, but she's sitting, relaxing. If you wanted to show her braids, they could be falling over the shoulder or something like that.

And about the light source, on the head and torso it looks like the light source comes from the upper left corner, but the legs look like they're being illuminated almost from the front.

And well, like I said, I love how you colored it and the colors you choose, nice pin up without being inappropriate, and a little detail about composition: our eyes always tend to look at letters, they like to read, but even when you put that 'Free Kisses' poster, it doesn't subtract attention from the main figure.

Hope you can understand me, and that this is helpful. :aww:
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:iconstevep12:
stevep12 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
very nice work !!!
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:icongopko:
Gopko Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
very nice![link]
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:icon1bench:
1Bench Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
lol....that middle leg bugs me now, ever since reading the critique
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:icondramiradarkthorn:
DramiraDarkthorn Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, wow!! Super hot! I love the pose and her body is amazing! Gorgeous, gorgeous work!!
Free? I'll take a kiss. :love:
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:iconbowski--productions:
Bowski--Productions Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
I love it! How do I meet her?
I want my free kisses ;)

www.bowskiproductions.com
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:iconplayer-designer:
Player-Designer Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Beautiful!
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:iconxyorux:
xyorux Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
i love the way you've painted this!
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:icongreenninja333:
greenninja333 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
love the face, the eyes and the colors
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
Very nice
If only something like this existed
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:iconhenshin2885:
HENshin2885 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Free kisses?
I'm in!~:heart:
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